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After reviewing my body paragraphs, I found that they are better than I thought they were! Overall, I think my body paragraphs provide clear topic sentences that relate back to my main argument and thesis, evidence, and analysis. However, I do think that in each paragraph I could add at least one more example and deeper analysis of the examples. Additionally, I think it would make my body paragraphs stronger to reference more in my analysis why (purpose) the author, Powell, used specific rhetorical strategies with certain examples in her text. But directly stating/relating Powell's purpose and how that pertains to my argument and topic sentences, I think that my paper will be much more effective.
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After reviewing my body paragraphs, I found that they are better than I thought they were! Overall, I think my body paragraphs provide clear topic sentences that relate back to my main argument and thesis, evidence, and analysis. However, I do think that in each paragraph I could add at least one more example and deeper analysis of the examples. Additionally, I think it would make my body paragraphs stronger to reference more in my analysis why (purpose) the author, Powell, used specific rhetorical strategies with certain examples in her text. But directly stating/relating Powell's purpose and how that pertains to my argument and topic sentences, I think that my paper will be much more effective.
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