Identifying Basic Grammar Patterns

Dear Reader,

For this blog post I revised my longest paragraph from my draft of my QRG referencing Rules for Writers "Grammar Basics" Section (pages 367-400). To access my longest paragraph on google drive, please click "here".

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After completing the assignment, I learned that I often write using the complex-compound or complex sentence structure. Although I feel that the way I write is my personal style, I may want to mix up my sentence structure. I almost feel as though a better approach for writing sentences in a QRG would be to write simple sentences; sentences that are short and concise. Apart from sentence structure, I think that the grammar in my writing is pretty decent.