If you would like to view my paragraph analysis on my QRG, click "here."
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After reviewing chapter 4 of Rules for Writers, I have noticed that some of my paragraphs need some work! Although many of my paragraphs provide decent background information that helps them transition nicely, some paragraphs lack that necessary information. Rules for writers helped me find that even a single transitional sentence providing sufficient information can be enough to smoothly connect each paragraph. Additionally, the organization of my QRG is pretty good, at least, I think! There may be a few sentences here or there that can be moved, but I think I like the way I have organized my QRG. The comments my peers made about my QRG helped me become more aware of which parts of my project need work. There are parts of paragraphs where there is poor grammar or sentence structure, but so far, I haven't noticed any serious changes that need to be made in my paragraphs. If I just add better transitions between paragraphs that will help with the flow of the paragraphs, the organization, the linking of ideas coherently, and the development of my main point/controversy.
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